my first vids

You want criticism - here we go

You can already do some advanced concepts but the overall cleanliness of moves/planes was somtimes missing imo. I would recommend you to focus more on the basics.

For the advanced video: Nice tricks! But there were quite a few "mess ups". If you do a video like this I would either try to work more on the tricks so its clearer on the video or, if its a special move which is particularly hard, offer it in a single video that allows discussion about it.

Another quite subjective thing: To me it makes the impression as if you sometimes wouldnt really enjoy/feel the Poi. My Suggestion: Close your eyes, play slow and move. Play more with variations of basics you know by heart. Dance with your Poi.

All mho - Hope that was constructive - if not . . . :55

cheers

andy